Ok so who else hated how Allegiant ended? I'm guessing pretty much everyone on the site. So why don't we have a little contest to see who can write the best Alternate Ending for Allegiant! I think all of us would like a different fate for our beloved Tobias and Tris. So who's with me? Let's get writing!

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2 sad to writeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

 I am scarred for life from that ending. No offence, Veronica Roth, but you kinde screwed everything up there.

My Idea:

      I see dark, red blood coming from my stomach. As my vision begins to fade, I see Tobias standing over me. I am scooped up and all I hear is Tobias saying "Hang in ther Tris, I love you.".  I wake up with a feeling of numbess and right on top of me I see blue eyes, just like the ones I saw when I fell into the net as the first jumper. "Tobias" I mumble, he comes closer, and his lips meet mine.

Ok, you guys get the point, Tris should NOT of died >:(

This was a very symbolic ending and I really appauld Veronica for havering the guts to actually do it.though I cried I loved It
I agree that Veronica Roth made an amazing and shocking ending that really shows how intense this book was and how much Tris was really made of. But I also do have I LOVE Fourtris and I really wish they ended up together and I wish that Tris could've lived longer and had the life she never thought she could have.

I really wish I had the gift of writing! I can only imagine the book ending with Tris and Tobias together somewhere...after all , this is fiction and we should always have some kind of happy ending to a story.There is too much sorrow in this world, why can't we believe there is an alternate universe? Love some of the ideas.


Guts?! Just destroy all young readers views of love and life.!? It was very annoying to hear her reasons...I think she just had a bad day and took it out on her readers and thus destroy a franchise...just my opinion
Divergentlover01 said:

This was a very symbolic ending and I really appauld Veronica for havering the guts to actually do it.though I cried I loved It

While I understand Tris's death, I think that Tobias should have died with her. During Insurgent, he told Tris if she was going to die, so was he. I think it would have given more closure.

I do think that if Tris goes down, Tobias goes down with her. Better yet, neither of them go down. I can just imagine someone trying to shoot Tris and Tobias taking the bullet for her, and then they both live. I feel like I've been cheated out of something that could have been incredible.

i look down to see red sticky blood coming from my stomach. 'why me?' i thought. 'this is it, the end of my life. why is this happning now? 'Tobias' i thought. tears thretned to pour out of my eyes. "i love you" i whispered 

everything went black.

PAGE BREAK

I woke up to Tobias. His tear staned face looked up at me in shock. "your not dead" he cheered still in shock. He quickley stood up and jumped around. 'happy dance' i thought. "tobi-" i was cut off by his lips on mine. "i love you he wispered. 

/p>

Dear Caleb,

IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN YOU!!!!! 

sincerely- a pissed off fangirl

How do u switch ur profile pic on ur page?

I like this ending

roxie1224 said:

 I am scarred for life from that ending. No offence, Veronica Roth, but you kinde screwed everything up there.

My Idea:

      I see dark, red blood coming from my stomach. As my vision begins to fade, I see Tobias standing over me. I am scooped up and all I hear is Tobias saying "Hang in ther Tris, I love you.".  I wake up with a feeling of numbess and right on top of me I see blue eyes, just like the ones I saw when I fell into the net as the first jumper. "Tobias" I mumble, he comes closer, and his lips meet mine.

Ok, you guys get the point, Tris should NOT of died >:(

Of course we're not happy with Tris dying!  But stop hating!  This book really brought through the theme of love and self-sacrifice really well and deal with it.  This is real life.  I think Veronica was very brave to do that and it was a beautiful book either way.  Yes I wanted fourtris to stay forever and stuff but you can't deny this book was amazing.  It shouldn't of been Caleb  or Tris.  Tris was right when she realized she was delivering Caleb to his execution and that was wrong of her bc that's what Caleb did to her

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